Gumnaamiya....
mere bina bhi sooni to na hongi mefile teri...
kuch fark na padega tujhe meri maut ki khabar sunkar....
khush reh lega tu mere nahi to kisi aur ke sath hi sahi...
un logo me se nahi tu jo jeete hain kisi ki judaai me tanha rehkar...
hum na rehnge to kis ko mehssos na hogi kami apni hasti ki...
gumnaami hi naseeeb thi, mar jaayenge isi tarah gumshuda rehkar...
kisi ko kya yaad aayegi in chehro ki shehar mein ek meri surat ....
soch lenge tha koi shaks jo ab rehta hoga naqab badalkar....
ab kya bayaan kare abni gumnam tanhaiyo ke haalaat...
hum khud thitak uththe hain aksar aaine mein apna chehra tak-kar....
kuch fark na padega tujhe meri maut ki khabar sunkar....
khush reh lega tu mere nahi to kisi aur ke sath hi sahi...
un logo me se nahi tu jo jeete hain kisi ki judaai me tanha rehkar...
hum na rehnge to kis ko mehssos na hogi kami apni hasti ki...
gumnaami hi naseeeb thi, mar jaayenge isi tarah gumshuda rehkar...
kisi ko kya yaad aayegi in chehro ki shehar mein ek meri surat ....
soch lenge tha koi shaks jo ab rehta hoga naqab badalkar....
ab kya bayaan kare abni gumnam tanhaiyo ke haalaat...
hum khud thitak uththe hain aksar aaine mein apna chehra tak-kar....
... Alok Mehta...
bahut khoob....
जवाब देंहटाएंthanks sim...
जवाब देंहटाएंgazal achhi thi
जवाब देंहटाएंBut jaisa maine pahle bhi tumko bataya tha...
lines ki length chhoti ho, to zyada sundar lagegi..
Try to remove redundant words...
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and read top 5-6 poems...I think they all are new..I mean, shayad tumne abhi padhii nahin hongi vo...