मंगलवार, 30 नवंबर 2010

chod deti hain sath umeed bhi ...

teri namaujoodgi ka sitam hi mujh par kya kam na tha
jo chod deti hain sath umeed bhi reh-reh kar teri....


aalok mehta...

2 टिप्‍पणियां:

  1. याद है आलोक

    आपकी इस २ लाइनों पर मैंने कुछ लिखने की कोशिश की थी ...

    Although not beautiful as the lines written by you... But still...

    ये रही

    http://tanhaaiyan.blogspot.com/2008/09/blog-post_15.html

    All credit goes to you...

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  2. u completed it very beautifully buddy....

    liked ur lines very much... and they are no way any less then mine...

    :)

    उत्तर देंहटाएं